Monday, 24 October 2011

Rumours Of A Good Year

Personally, I'm not too sure about the end result of this caption. I like the picture, but I don't think my story really did it justice. Should I remake this one (possibly as a film noir style) or is it ok as it is? 

1 comment:

  1. I like it the way it is, so minor grammar errors, but enjoyed the flow. That body has curves I wish I had, I bet that stomach would feel so nice with hands caressing it.