Friday, 19 August 2011

Swaying Into The Sunset


  1. Oh my! that was incredible beautiful Kara. I think I could felt the wind gazing and touching my face in the right parts through the story. I felt quite attracted and engulfed by the prose in this one...

    Overall I didn't think you could go that soft and make for a brighter future on Sanura. I think the part when she hits and deals with her captors is more like you ^-^. Just the final was a bit unexpected "giggle"

    Hugs and Kisses Alectra

  2. Wonderfully written caption! The plot was well told. Great title as well.